Monday, March 8, 2010

Lesson learned

One day when I was about 6 years old living in Tulsa, Oklahoma I was playing in my front yard with some friends and a car pulled up that I didn't know who it was. They were asking for my uncle so I went up to the car and was talking to him and got in a lot of trouble from my step dad and mom. I didn't know what I did wrong until my mom talked to me about not going up and talking to strangers, and told me all the reasons why I shouldn't. So that was a lesson I learned that day.

Friday, January 22, 2010

Comma What?

My father had left our house in the midst, of a fight between Lindsey and my mother. My mother was trying to get Lindsey to go with her to the Y to swim. Without thinking, Lindsey had blared "I'd rather die!" at the top of her lungs. My father watched as my mother froze, then burst fleeing to their bedroom to wail behind the door. He quietly tucked his notebook in his jacket pocket, took the car keys off the hook by the back door and snuck out.

Monday, January 11, 2010

Literary Elements: TAKS PT 3



1.) Satire- a literary work holding up human vices and follies to ridicule or sworn

2.)Irony-A pretense of ignorance and of willingness to learn from another assumed in order to make the others false conceptions conspicuous by adroit questioning

3.) Analogy- Inference that if two or ,ore things agree with one another in some respects they will probably agree with others

4.) Foreshadowing- To represent, indicate, or typify beforehand

Monday, January 4, 2010

Story Spinners: Option_1




As the old man approached my friends and me we could hear his gibberish words in the distance. We all looked at each other and tried to make out what he was saying , but none of us really understood what he had said. We all could tell that he was homeless by his looks and him being barefoot.

All he was carrying was a big black flashlight and he had it on shining it in our eyes. We all were so glad that we had our bicycles because he came up to us and begged us for money, but i had remembered all the times that my parents had told me to not talk to strangers. If they ask for anything to just ignore them and walk away or if you have to run away and scream for help.

So after we nicely told him we had nothing to give him he started chasing us so we all ran and jumped on our bicycles as fast as we could and went to my house and told our parents what happened and they called the cops. After that day we never had any troubles with any homeless people.

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

My Bucket List

1. go to Hawaii
2. learn how to play the guitar
3. learn how to play the drums
4. learn how to belly dance
5. get married
6. have kids
7. live next door to Channing Tatum or Lil wayne
8.get a college degree
9. own a blue ferrari
10. live on the beach
11. sky diving
12. own my own Harley (pink and black)
13. be famous
14. be in a teen vogue magazine
15. be a famous fashion designer
16.be a make-up artist for famous people
17. Live in California
18. be a Coyote ugly
19.

Friday, September 11, 2009


8 years ago i was sitting in my 3rd grade class in Tulsa, Oklahoma when everyone stopped what they were doing to watch the TV. Many kids were getting picked up from there parents because of it and i didn't understand what was going on, but when i got home my mom was telling what happened and all we did was watch TV for a long time and it was so sad about all the people that they killed and were missing. I remember hearing the new numbers of the people missing and killed, and all the families that were separated because of it. I think 20 years from now yes people will still be remembering this horrible day. i think the torrists chose America because of our soliders in Iraq and Afganistan. I knew one of my friends that had move there and he died in 9/11. If i was to write a story it would be in my point of view and it would be about everything that went on.

Thursday, September 10, 2009

My house is very commodious